Ina Parlina | The Jakarta Post
Sydney | Sun, February 26, 2017 | 10:21 am
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Australian Prime Minister Malcolm Turnbull took President Joko “Jokowi” Widodo for a short walk around the Royal Botanical Gardens on Sunday morning as the two leaders prepare to get into more serious business during a bilateral meeting around lunch time.

About a year ago, President Jokowi took the Australian leader to Tanah Abang Market in Central Jakarta for a blusukan (impromptu visit).

Just like any other Sunday, people were seen walking and jogging through the park, which borders the waters across the famous Sydney Opera House. Jokowi and Turnbull walked together without any apparent excessive security.

In a relaxed ambience, Jokowi was introduced to some passersby, including a young Australian father carrying his infant in a baby-strap on his chest.

“This is an example of a good father,” said Turnbull when he and Jokowi chatted with the man.

After wrapping up the morning walk, the two leaders will engage in a one-on-one meeting to discuss efforts to improve bilateral ties amid recent tensions in military training cooperation.

Following the row, Jokowi reportedly suggested allowing Canberra to take part in joint patrols in the South China Sea, an issue that has sparked concerns from various elements at home.

Foreign Minister Retno LP Marsudi refused to confirm whether the matter would be discussed during the meeting.

Jokowi’s two-day visit to Australia is set to focus on strengthening trade and investment and maritime cooperation. Jakarta will push for the finalization of the Indonesia-Australia Comprehensive Economic Partnership Agreement (IA-CEPA). It is expected that the IA-CEPA will be concluded this year.

Jakarta and Canberra are also set to sign two memorandums of understanding on cooperation in maritime affairs and the creative economy.

Analysis

This news story told us about Indonesia’s President visited Australia to discuss business between Indonesia and Australia. They focused in military, trade, and maritime cooperation. As we had known if there was recent tensions about military training cooperation between those two country.

The first paragraph or the lead of the news story contained almost all the element of 5W+H questions such as the “who, what, how, where, and when” element. Therefore, without read the following paragraph the reader could know what the news story is about.

Unfortunately, the next four paragraphs contained unnecessary information about the main idea of this news story. Those four paragraphs talked about what happen during their morning walk rather than talked about the detail information that needed.

Eventually, the reader persuaded to keep read the news because the detail information were in the fifth paragraph until the last paragraph. The author provided the detail information with strong evidence.

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